Young people today learn more from the internet and television than they do from teachers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advancements in internet and other digital technologies influenced the young generation and nowadays for learning they rely more on digital technologies than traditional classrooms. Although internet is a vast source of information for students, in my opinion, it cannot outweigh the importance of classroom teaching.
Undoubtedly, the advancement of technology changed the educational systems and internet based teaching methods are introduced to the students from smaller classes. Internet has much more study materials than that are available from traditional classroom teaching, which the students can get access to at any time and from anywhere they want. For instance, e-learning sites, video tutorials, blogs and e-books are easily available from internet; many are free of cost and can be accessed from the privacy of a home. It is a fact that luxury of these internet options moves the students away from traditional class rooms.
However, there are some aspects which students or young generation learn only from traditional schools. Traditional class room teaching inculcates many human values to students such as discipline, value of helping and sharing, importance of team work and interpersonal skills which the virtual learning cannot offer. Classroom teachings give opportunities to discuss a topic among peers and clearing doubts with a teacher. Teachers provide feedback to students on their studies and for their overall development, which are not possible for the internet.
In conclusion, although internet and television are vast source of information for young generation, these cannot be a complete replacement to the traditional classroom teaching. Traditional classroom teaching plays an important role in personality development in youth. So educationists should take a balanced approach while implementing changes to education systems instead of allowing classroom teaching to give way to internet based learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this internet' or ''?
Suggestion: this internet;
... of a home. It is a fact that luxury of these internet options moves the students away from tr...
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Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'giving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: giving
... instead of allowing classroom teaching to give way to internet based learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80487804878 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04834840144 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.218370472 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193805406904 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762801376628 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629495798447 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121718352501 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677036905077 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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