Global water use by sector | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

Essay topics:

Global water use by sector

The presented graphs give the information about how much water was used globally by three sectors from 1900 to 2000, and also the water consumption in two different countries in 2000.Overall it is immediately apparent that, Agriculture sector used the most water in comparison with other sectors. Meanwhile, all sectors increased over the time frame and Brazilian people consumed more water than
that people of Congo.Regarding the amount of water use in 1900, the highest sector using water was Agriculture with the number’s standing at 500 km2, while Industrial use and Domestic use were the lowest sector which was listed at around 100 and 50 km2 each, after 1900 Agriculture rose significantly to around 3000 km2, at the same time Industrial use and Domestic use climbed slightly to approximately 1200 and 500 km2 respectively.Moving to other information, Brazil had a higher figure for all parts which was noted at 176 million of population, 26,500 km2 for irrigated land and 359 m2 water consumption per person.
Meanwhile, Congo’s were well under Brazil’s figure with 5.2 million of population, 100 km2 for irrigated land and 8 m2 water consumption per person.

Votes

This essay topic by users

Post date	Users	Rates	Link to Content
2019-05-08	alifdores	73	view
2019-02-22	ryan24	56	view
2019-02-22	ryan24	56	view
2019-02-22	ryan24	67	view
2019-02-22	ryan24	73	view

>>> More users practiced this topic >>>

Essay Categories

IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Essays by user Khairul Umam :

Global water use by sector 87

Write an essay by this topic

Comments

Essay evaluations by e-grader

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...on per person. Meanwhile, Congo's were well under Brazil's figure with 5....
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 965.302439024 200% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 9.24401913876 4.92477711251 188% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.698262244 2.65546596893 441% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.45097560976 159% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 22.4926829268 307% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 419.696186412 43.030603864 975% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 644.0 112.824112599 571% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.6666666667 22.9334400587 304% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168441911322 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114917409904 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510528541514 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07401167366 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106874908366 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 56.9 13.2329268293 430% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.78 61.2550243902 -94% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 6.51609756098 351% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.5 10.3012195122 374% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 37.5 11.4140731707 329% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.06136585366 136% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 36.0 11.4329268293 315% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.9970731707 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.