Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progresses are also equally important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Economic growth and development is a primary goal for many governments around the world. However, some people are of the view that there are other sectors that require the same amount of attention. This essay would further debate on both sides and would even express my view point during the course of the exposition.
To embark upon the progresses in the fields of science and technology, which according to some is of equal importance think that development of technology makes the lives of people comfortable and enables them to move forward with the world. Likewise, growth in science helps a country utilize the latest scientific methods for the development of agriculture and health that leads to increased food production and advanced healthcare facilities. For example, Japan is an example of a country that has made revolutionary progress in science and technology which has made it the most prosperous country in Southeast Asia. That’s why japan is leading the world in technological sector as of now, and its further developing more sophisticated machines to enhance the quality of human life.
Few argue that growth and development of economy is a mandatory requirement for country’s prosperity. The reason behind is; that economy provides the platform for the progress of every department in terms of cash. Without a stable and established economy, the much needed funds required for the development cannot be ensured. For instance, all the developed countries of the world’s like UK, USA and so on had first focused on their economic growth and stability as a result of which it’s positive effects emerged as improved literacy rate, decreased poverty and so on. Thus, economic progress is of crucial importance for the overall growth of country.
To sum up, according to my opinion also, although, progress in the field of science and technology can be influence people’s lives in a number of positive ways. However, I still believe that growth of every sector including science and technology relies on the economic progression to a great extent and should therefore be the main focus of governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...es and would even express my view point during the course of the exposition. To embark upon the p...
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...reat extent and should therefore be the main focus of governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25581395349 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92646375388 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55523255814 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9158452345 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190087064989 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687429421608 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567059981686 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117163825005 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376430999747 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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