More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
Nowadays, young people and teenagers, in particular, are more likely to study abroad at colleges or universities in foreign countries such as America, Canada and Australia. it could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
There are several reasons why it may be argued that parents should not allow their children to study overseas. In my opinion, it is difficult for people to adapt various changes in their life and they can be unfamiliar with languages, cuisine, lifestyle and culture other countries, which leads to culture shock and depression. So, they will have to spend much time to find out and get used to a new environment. In addition, families are also becoming dispersed because geographical distances and timelines do not coincide. Therefore, when studying foreign, children are not close to their family resulting in the lack of love of their relative till growing up.
However, I suppose that these drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits. Firstly, they could experience ideal environment and have a high-quality education system to reach their full potential. After gaining an academic qualification, students may get access to more well-paid jobs. For instance, they could be welcomed to the largest companies in Vietnam and even multinational corporations with handsome salaries. And they would be confident enough to compete with foreign candidates in employment if they get a high-level knowledge and expertise by application and perseverance.
In conclusion, from advantages and disadvantages, I believe that studying abroad is a better choice for people to expand the knowledge and job opportunities than their peers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0447761194 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02231883196 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9475156162 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136809346338 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489196476415 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634358758937 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600905886033 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064262977134 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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