More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
These days, there is a plethora of students choosing to study at colleges and universities in another country. In my opinion, I would argue that its advantages are more significant than the disadvantages.
First of all, the best point of studying abroad is that students can boost their confidence as well as gain living skills and knowledge. This means that, when they live overseas, there is no one living beside them, no family, no friends. There are plenty of challenges or situations that will come up. Therefore, learners must face it by themselves, try to deal with it and overcome it. As a result, students will obtain many expensive experiences. Moreover, living in another country gives students the opportunity to expand their horizons. There are a lot of opportunities to meet new people, learn new things about the cultures.
However, studying overseas has its drawbacks as well, such as spending tons of money on living expenses or fees at schools and universities. For example, in Vietnam, students need to pay tuition fees for school is just about 10.000.000 vnd to 100.000.000 vnd/year. When they study in the US, the fee is up to 23.000 dollars. Thus, these problems probably cause some stress for learners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...more significant than the disadvantages. First of all, the best point of studying...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83878977956 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.401579322 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211144207186 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690305793712 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091457986782 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157967339588 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970424844624 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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