The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities on land and in the sea. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.
There are two main reasons why animals why animal are existing. Firstly, the loss and degradation of natural habitats. Now that pollution is stressful climate change reduces the quality of the environment, making reduce the living area of living species. Secondly, hunting and illegal trafficking is still a worrisome danger to animals. This lead to implanting in the ecosystem and directly leads to extinct. Many rare and wild animals are killed for the sake of serving human needs such as food, souvenir, and high-end jewelry.
Some solutions could be adopted to improve the situation. Most important, governments and environmental organizations should impose strict regulations, as well as provide support for native habitat restoration that assist in the recovery of once-degraded ecosystems. Governments and individuals must join hands to stop the illegal trade of endangered species.
In conclusion, natural habitat losses and illegal wildlife hunting & trafficking are the two main drivers of animal extinction. To address this issue, governments must protect and restore the natural ecosystems, and everyone should join hands to stop the illegal trade of endangered species
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41991341991 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8890502206 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3102478211 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3076923077 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21212697838 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063748952851 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906324088652 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123481576878 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107409402647 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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