In this modern age, sport plays an essential key role in the tourism development sector. Hosting an outdoor game tournament like FIFA world cup or Cricket world cup will definitely bring the attention of all over the world, it also provides an opportunity to bring economic growth in the host country. Concurrently, the hosting international sports events bring loads of beneficial outcomes because the image of sports is also known as a fourth factor to makes pride and proud of the particular nation. However, I personally believe with that organizing an outdoors game have more benefits than drawbacks.
Initially, hosting a big sports activity like Olympic leads a significant attraction towards the audiences. Secondly, the duration of games event like for example, more than one months will create a huge chance to earn money from different particular multi-national organization in term of commercial advertisement, sales of shoes, jersey and flags and much more. Simultaneously, it also creates an exceptional possibility to have a massive number of tourists in order to develop tourism industry. And thirdly, the event organizers can gain a profits extremely by selling costly tickets.
Another factor, sports management will be able to host another outdoor games event form those collected loads of amount for next year. Moreover, they can make an investment in the sports infrastructure developments in construction of new stadiums.
To sum up, I strongly trust with that hosting sports is the most beneficial strategy in order developing tourism board and sports sector. In an additional, it will create maximum outcomes in every individual small and large business sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...games event like for example, more than one months will create a huge chance to earn money...
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...rm of commercial advertisement, sales of shoes, jersey and flags and much more. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42045454545 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9859995281 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2613624009 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250510967712 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891786682007 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487642414435 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148983100932 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533164240762 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.