Some people think that individuals can prevent the issues of global climate change. However, other don’t agree with this view and believe that there are governments and substantial businesses, which will helps to reduce this problem.
On the one hand, there are some people who think that individuals can take some proactive actions to reduce and bring positive result in the issue of global climate change, for example, if every person tries to use corrugated carton boxes instead of using plastic bags. Furthermore, if people really care about creating an Eco-friendly environment, then it would be good to use paper bags, reusable cloth bags, canvas bags, jute bags. Another thing, people can do planting a trees because when you plant trees you don't just makes your property or your community nicer, you also directly reducing your carbon footprint. To a large extent trees eat carbon dioxide.
On the other hand, Government should stop the generation of power from fossil fuels which causes more carbon emission and increases global climate change. Government should also ban the factories where production of plastic bags is produced. Government can invest in green energy sources like wind, solar and hydro powder. Another thing, big businesses like Auto mobile companies are trying to produce more vehicles which is environmentally-friendly. In other words, they produce cars that are charged by electricity or solar power instead of fossil fuel.
To conclude, there are many ways to perform and prevent global climate change, I have to agree with that individuals, government and large cooperation sectors have equal responsibility to protect the earth from global climate change.
- The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 92
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 78
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tree' or simply 'trees'?
Suggestion: a tree; trees
.... Another thing, people can do planting a trees because when you plant trees you dont j...
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Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... trees because when you plant trees you dont just makes your property or your commun...
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Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other words, they produce cars that are charged by electricity or solar power in...
^^
Line 6, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the earth from global climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, another thing, for example, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38202247191 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76526266529 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6886414956 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347818060349 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118911385921 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125719079364 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205844999121 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778745221283 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.