Some people argue that space exploration had more to do with national pride than international effort.
To what extent do you agree with this?
How do you think space exploration will change in the future?
Travelling outer space should be held by its own country because it will bring the country reward in worldwide, but if the country collaborated with intercontinental, such countries will help for the financial because it is pricey. I do believe that it would be better if the government cooperated with society, and discovering the aerospace will help the people shifting to another planet.
The government should provide the interplanetary exploration because it will obtain international pride. Such country has researchers, entrepreneurs, scientists, and so on, and they have diversity of educational backgrounds when they work in the same partnership, so they can make a new invention to visit other planets. International Aerospace Scientific Meeting was held in Bali, Indonesia in 2001, which attended by 500 international scientists in order to give a reward for Indonesian President as sent a rocket into space which could determine the age of the earth. Therefore, other countries compete to carry out a mission into the galaxy.
In the future, space travel will be easier because technology is developed well. There is a vehicle which will provide many passengers to visit other planets, and this place can be a favourite tourism site to visit. For instance, in the next 30 years, Mars will be a favourite destination to stay because visitors can use a space capsule to go there. It will be interesting as they should use spacesuit while enjoying the scenery.
On the whole, the country should do an aerospace trip to boost national pride, so in the future visiting the other planets will be more effortless with the spacecraft.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...he same partnership, so they can make a new invention to visit other planets. International A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18045112782 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05709144929 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7176552379 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.272727273 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179190910845 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739499729145 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614336357713 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12384137525 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514598882899 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.