Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, the world is witnessing a huge revolution in many sectors such as technology sector and this might lead to expanding selections in front of humans. Some people think today the choices are extended. While others believe that we do not have many selections. I strongly agree the view and reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs to reach a reasonable conclusion.
First of all, invention of internet in the late of 1980s expanded our visions and mix between cultures around the world. Moreover, the development in the means of transportation such as plans which its speed above the rate of sound, this increase our choices to travel for studying or do businesses and open our horizon to have a look about other’s actions. For example, a study has been conducted in the one of developed countries showed people agree with that the revolution in technologies and industries the word might cause a growth in our selections. As a result, computers and later on networks increased choices.
Secondly, the development in industrial sectors creates many chances and promote youngsters to generate a creative thoughts. In addition, a rising in the number of universities and colleges may help students to select a domain which they like. Not only increasing the number of universities expand our choices, but also the advancement in scientific researches extend our choices as well. As a consequence, the said that the advanced sciences expanding our selections is highly true.
To sum up, although the development in sciences complicate our live, people agree that the developing in industrial and technology sectors extend our selections well being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22676579926 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97358733498 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9866299468 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138213321971 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549008927023 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721046123495 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900910219333 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730703916756 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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