This is no doubt that our society is being developed rapidly. Accordingly, to show other people their expensive things is one of ways to indroduce themselves. This essay will attempt to show why this situation has been emerged in our society.
First of all, when consumer buy items, they would think about priority of purchase because of the quality and brand's reputation. Most brands which are well-known would have a long history and might repeat success and failure for evolution.
As a result, it became higher quaility than other products that are produced by brand which is less reputation.
Second of reason, people tend to receive attention from other people. For instance, when they have an important appointment such as a business conference which is for many peopl to gather, preparing luxury clothes would be necessary because they believe that better result of trade depends on the first impression.
recognized brand can not only provide high quality goods but also make people being high-class.
However, some people argue that this situation can cause extreme gap in between poor people and wealthy people.
In my opinion, since cheaper products are also produced by popular brand, this problem would solve in period of short time.
To sum up, I believe that the more attention people have, the higher quality they guarantee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recognized
...rade depends on the first impression. recognized brand can not only provide high quality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, second, so, well, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17808219178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44854471863 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65296803653 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7271822646 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159832283214 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059684674369 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038564759006 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673008873838 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245244924628 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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