As English is now the world language and an essential skill in business, English language instruction should begin in kindergarten.'
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Present your ideas and opinions with examples where necessary.
language plays a phenomenal role to show artistic expressions of ideas views and emotions. At present, technology has made whole world a global village where english is dominating in most parts of the world as an international language. Thus, it is very important to inculcate english skills to a child in his very early days of education. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
There are multifarious points to support my views. First and foremost, teaching english language in childhood will allow child to develop his educational career, employment sources, business in any part of ...
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tnx sir what could make this
tnx sir
what could make this essay 8.0 or 8.5 scoring ???
More content wanted with some
More content wanted with some specific examples, and make the Sentence-Sentence Coherence higher.
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Characters: 1559 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.339 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.804 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.496 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5