Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
My sister told me, all of us should one day taste bitterness of life finally at one moment. Sometimes, that moment occurs during education hood, sometimes during adult hood; it will happen finally! This bitterness for anyone has one meaning. For one group attending classes is the end of the world; try to elude that; try to disgrace that; and try to show that as trivial thing at the end. Why, then, attending class after that straggling effort of this group still has some fan, not being optional? The reason is due to provided advantageous in which boys and girls can have social relationships and arose situation on which they can get familiar with themselves personalities.
To begin with, attending class’s most significant reason is entrance to society. Boy and girls can get acquainted with their strong and weakness points of their personalities, all of whose will be so vital for their future. For example, when I wanted to go elementary class, I did not know anything about my timid personality. I scared from bully person who stood beside of our school. He bit all my friends and me several times. Knowing that personality, I tried to change when I finally decided to change. Had that bully boy never bit me, I would have failed during my next steps in my life. As an illustration, after overcoming my personality, I could defend my other friends when they stuck in situation like me. I think I owe all of them to attending class.
Additionally, making friend is another advantageous of not being optional of classes. Seeing various people, children can get familiar with different personalities. Either they can express their feeling by them, or they use from tried-and-test method for knowing people. For example, when I was at high school, I saw different personalities, one was too jealous, one was too composure that killed you to death, and one was too ambitious. For one thing, I could choose among them my friends, then, I had enough time to know to what extent I can trust to them. All those experiences will not obtain unless I tested various personalities.
All in all, to put the issue into a nut shell, I contended that attending class is much more superior to optional class. If you supposed to grow a child, isn’t that what you think, right?
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I scared from bully person who stood beside of our school.
I am scared of those bully persons who stood beside our school.
all of whose will be so vital for their future.
all of them will be so vital for their future.
Either they can express their feeling by them,
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Still have grammatical issues. Read a good grammar book.
And you need to be more straight forward. Don't think so complicated for an essay. Try this pattern:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 1816 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.609 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.627 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.13 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.752 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.478 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.462 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
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