You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain
to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket .in your letter
Say who you are
Give details about the accident
Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I visited the supermarket last week and injured myself in a minor accident. Everyday on my way to work I stop by the supermarket to buy the newspaper and my favourite sandwich, however I have not been down there since the injury.
Let me explain in detail about the incident. As I was walking near the seafood section I suddenly lost my balance and slipped on some water, thus falling on my back. As a result, my bone has been dislocated and I have been advised complete bed rest for at least 15 days. However, the staff was very helpful and helped me get up and gather my items.
Although, it is a minor injury I request you to please look into this matter and undertake some precautionary measures. Moreover, if the floor is wet it would be advisable to put up a notice alerting the customers to avoid using that path.
Looking forward to your reply and hoping some quick action is taken.
Your Faithfully,
Mary Adams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
... customers to avoid using that path. looking forward to your reply and hoping some q...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, at least, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59776536313 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51958404024 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68156424581 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6025905866 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146996825606 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052417129362 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674613780532 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810805718532 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822316151974 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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