These days people have contradictory opinion regarding knowledge, where some argue that nothing can surpass the knowledge gained from books, while another school of thought opine that experience is the greatest teacher and not everything can be learnt from books. In my opinion, although reading can certainly develop your intellect, it cannot provide the solution to all problems and hence in this essay we shall discuss that life experience is vital.
To begin with, first and foremost the knowledge gained from text books are theoretical and cannot be applied practically. Circumstances may vary and sometimes the answers provided may not be applicable to the situation. Additionally, books portray an ideal scenario that may differ from the real world. To illustrate, many parental books advice parents to be gentle and talk to teenagers when they misbehave instead of being harsh. However, it is impossible to assume that children will always listen, and therefore, at time parents must use corporal punishment to enforce discipline.
Secondly, trial and error helps one to navigate in difficult times and find the most optimum solution. Many learn much more from their mistakes, rather than from books, as those lessons are deeply embedded in their minds. Lastly, every persons journey is different and cannot be compared to one another. Consequently, the one solution may not be applicable in all scenarios. For example, many books do not recommend formal education in order to be successful. While it maybe true for some, in the real world education is paramount and absolutely essential to sustain oneself.
To recapitulate, I believe, experience teaches you handle personal crises more effectively instead of relying on books. Even though some may resort to books in times of turmoil, knowledge gained from the ups and downs in life cannot be replaced.
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- It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to be gentle and talk to teenagers when the misbehave instead of being harsh. However, it is ...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...e real world education is paramount and absolutely essential to sustain oneself. To recapitulate,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32094594595 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73474043394 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3898254434 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213193233921 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632994129586 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075868094783 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138530071491 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055545081085 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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