Dear Mary,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I got the first prize at the recently held photography organization. i am very happy and wanted to first share the news with you.
Let me explain the event in details. It was an online competition and all the participants had to send their best photograph to the organizers. They in turn made the pictures available to the audience through an exhibition. We were all invited for the event and had to describe our photo to the people. Lastly, the audience had to cast their vote to the photograph they liked the most. The winner was decided based on the votes and judgement of the organizers. It was a week long process and by the end of the week I emerged victorious.
I sent a picture of a beautiful sunset which I had captured during my stay in Singapore. It was a beautiful sight and the colors of the sun popped against the blue background of the sea and sky.
Next week I will be coming to your city to show case my picture at the Christmas exhibition. Therefore, I would like to invite you to the event. It has been a long time since we have met and I'm very excited to show you my prize.
looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Sally
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...recently held photography organization. i am very happy and wanted to first share...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...recently held photography organization. i am very happy and wanted to first share...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... been a long time since we have met and Im very excited to show you my prize. l...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...m very excited to show you my prize. looking forward to hearing from you. Kind Re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4140969163 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53576180105 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581497797357 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2969063036 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.625 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177078383663 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480261130677 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443120920785 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830384819326 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432509436329 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.