You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Dear Frank,
I am very sorry to hear about your accident last week due to which we were not able to play cricket match together last week. So, I thought to appraise you about the last weekend match.
Last Saturday evening was freezing with temperature near to zero. However, in-spite of tough weather condition we had our match with Team 'Dare Devils'. The competition was neck to neck as their team batting line-up was strong and they scored 100 runs in 10 overs.
Our Team 'Cruiser' won the match with one wicket in hand. I missed opening the batting with you as together we make best opening batsmen duo. As you were injured, I had to open the batting line with Amit and we scored 50 runs together however, after that our wicket started falling quickly and at one point of the game we were at 95 runs with 9 wickets fallen. In the last ball, I played my favorite 'helicopter shot' and scored a six, which made us win the game in last moment.
I felt we could have done better in the middle line-up because of which we were at verge of losing the match. However, despite of the ups and downs, we had a teeth-biting match and every player in the team felt your absence.
I would be visiting you with few other players, at the Hospital tomorrow evening. Hope you get well soon.
Take Care
Warm Regards
Mohit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47933884298 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13146247908 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5521732802 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4285714286 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290987591246 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103938388723 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584684307937 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167239070022 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664061822712 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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