Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks that exist on the living of inhabitants. In my opinion, governments could do much more to enhance the quality of life for residents.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">few major disadvantages that
exist on the living of tenants. In my conclusion, governments seem do
much more to upgrade the quality of life for residents. The fundamental issue for anybody who trusts emigrate to
a expansive city is that the fetched of living is
likely higher than it's in a small town. Usually since that
they got to pay higher costs for lodging, activity and indeed nourishment.
Another is that tall wrongdoing and developing difference between
the well off and the destitute. Besides, the discuss contamination is steadily expanding to
an disturbing level since of emanations from
vehicles and mechanical zones.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">The result is that the city may
be undesirable and unpleasant with stuffed conditions.
However, there are different arrangements for the
government seem take to tackle these issues. Firstly, they seem subsidize cash within
the building social lodging, giving free instruction to diminish the taken
a toll of living. Furthermore, the overwhelming and tremendous vehicles ought
to be prohibited amid surge hours to control activity issue and contaminated discuss.
In Ho Chi Minh city, for illustration, the government has propelled the
law denied car entering the centres of the city from 5 P.M to 10 P.M
to control the activity stick. The third alternative would
consider a advancement arrange for common cities which
is close to a mega city to move mechanical ranges from
the centres. This strategy is able to draw in representatives who need to seek
for a work at local. In conclusion, Governments ought to actualize a extend of
measures to upgrade the benchmarks of living for citizens.<o:p></o:p></p>
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-02-26 | Mai Tuan Vu | 11 | view |
| 2019-02-26 | Mai Tuan Vu | 78 | view |
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- Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks that exist on the living of inhabitants. In my opinion, governments could do much more to enhance the quality of life for residents. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, third, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4040.0 1615.20841683 250% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 18.2805429864 5.12529762239 357% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 19.7019742415 2.80592935109 702% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.742081447964 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 800.1 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.6 1.60771543086 224% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 4.76152304609 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 481.92261827 49.4020404114 976% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 404.0 106.682146367 379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 71.0 4.38176352705 1620% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.022564272328 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033250434824 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496347164608 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00743034017845 0.151304729494 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019295340243 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 75.7 13.0946893788 578% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -120.06 50.2224549098 -239% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.5 11.3001002004 314% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 88.74 12.4159519038 715% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.8 8.58950901804 149% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 97.0 9.78957915832 991% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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