Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Since the fast development of technology changes in the world become surprisingly quickly. Many people believe that keeping up with these changes such as improvement of technology and communicating could have many negative effects in their life and make them less enjoy their life. I agree with this point of view merely to some extent.
On the one hand, what makes today human life so easy is enhance of technology. Advancement of technology could help people to experience convenient in their life. However, in the past, people have to do many hard tasks and responsibilities by themselves. For instance, in the past, people have to travel with animals and it made their tripe so difficult, time-consuming and dangerous. But, today, people can use the latest types of transportation vehicles to enjoy their trip and have a delightful vacation. Several scientists claimed that many research and statistics represented the fact that the development of technology has a direct effect on the satisfaction of people from their life in comparison to the past. Hence, technology ease people's lives and have positive effects on their happiness.
On the other hand, one of the significant effects of quick changes in world is increasing pressure of working. With the rapid advancement of everything in the world, people have to work more than in the past. Because they have to overcome immense numbers of problems that we faced more than the past. For this reason, people have to spend most of their time working on their businesses and less time on entertainment and their families. In contrast, the people in past had more spare to spend with their families; therefore, they fell more satisfied and cheerfulness in their life. Moreover, the research that published in American society claims that due to increasing the pressure of working and making money these days, the number of people who suffered from anxiety, high level of stress and depression become 25% increase than 2010.
Hence, the rapid changes in the world can affect the satisfaction and cheerfulness of people by increasing the pressure of a busy work schedule on them.
In nutshell, according to all above-mentioned reasons and examples, it is crystal clear that fast development of many things in the world would make many changes that several numbers of people who can not keep up with because of high levels of pressure it might produce. I anticipated that in the future, fast spread of mental illnesses such as depression, anxiety, and panics because of the fast speed of changes in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since the fast development of technology chan...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple have to work more than in the past. Because they have to overcome immense numbers o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08747044917 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81844086642 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463356973995 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6661525202 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.263157895 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392402184349 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125573108993 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562820402572 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209722518193 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065858754632 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.