Dear Mr. Rajesh,
My name is Adhi and I am an engineer at Cochin Shipyard Limited. I just moved to the house next to yours. I am a bachelor and will be a single occupant of the house. I am extremely delighted to have found a place in this locality as it is a serene residential area, away from the industrial estate.
I have been here since Wednesday and I am thinking of organizing a party next Saturday between 5:00 PM and 8:00 PM at my place. The party would start at around 5:15 PM, with religious rituals by a priest, followed by a meet and greet. Later, at 6:30 PM, a friend of mine will be performing Carnatic music. Finally, dinner will be served from 7:30 PM. I will try my best to keep the noise levels under control; however, I would like to extend my sincere apologies in advance just in case you get disturbed by the party.
I would also like to use this opportunity to invite you to the party. I can assure you that you will have a good time.
I look forward to seeing you at the party.
Warm regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will be a single occupant of the house. I am extremely delighted to have found a ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ea, away from the industrial estate. I have been here since Wednesday and I am...
^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...opportunity to invite you to the party. I can assure you that you will have a goo...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you that you will have a good time. I look forward to seeing you at the party...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27411167513 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37310594748 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598984771574 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8065423379 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7692307692 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772461098612 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309730265276 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345075057828 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606065838725 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280187307896 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.