Some inhabitants think that finding jobs that suitable with interest is happiness. Whereas, others think that happiness is not only influence by good jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give explanation
Rich, elegant, and well educated people seem perfect when they are covered by doing job that they really interested on. Whereas, some people do their jobs as daily activities only and find the other happiness factors beside job. I personally convinced that both of them have some reasons.
To begin with, this quote will remind us that happiness job is; “Do what you love and love what you do”. Moreover, people find jobs based on their interest area to do a totality of career. Furthermore, by loving their job, they can earn better salary and have more leisure time to frolic. They create a gracious family also. For them, happiness is simple things which are finding jubilant jobs, ecstasy money, elated career, and buoyant family.
Nevertheless, some people do their opposite by taking job for ordinary living. Thus, they do not focus just for job but they also more talent to create happiness. In addition, they prefer give more chance to dejected people. For examples, making a simple party to lamentable and disable people or collecting clothes for poignant earthquake victims. Indeed, happiness for them is happened when pathetic people smiling by small things.
From my personal point view, I think both of them are unique. Again, finding job based on interest will develop career easier and give them happiness. However, lovely job is not only one factor of happiness. Moreover, Cambridge University research that shared a simple give by smiling will give you pleasure. Besides, we have other factors to be happiness such as togetherness of family and society. Making amelioration even small for plight inhabitants would create happiness for conviviality people.
Overall, it is important to find jobs based on interest, but no matter the jobs, there are many factors that influence and affect happiness. Giving fairly times enough to family and society is the key of happiness.
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