The bar chart illustrates the proportion of men and women in Australia who were doing physical exercise as daily routine in 2010.
Overall,According to chart teenage boys are more interested about their fitness whereas women whose age 35 to 44 ,45 to 54 and 55-64 this age of women were more concerned about their fitness and this there figure was quite identical .
According to chart attendance of men was highest at the teenage age the figure was 52.8 percent next two age group participation rate was a downward tendency and figure was 42.2 and 39.5 percent respectively whereas age of 35 to 44 was lowest figure who did physical exercise regularly .But there was a upward tendency for Rest of three age group and finally male reached at 46.7 percent at age group 65 over.
At the teenage age women participation rate was second lowest figure for women age group the figure was 47.7 parent. Popularity of exercise increased after three age group (25 to 34,35-44,45-54) at the age group 45-54 figure reached at peak of the whole chart percentage was 53.3 percent next age group made a slight fall but the figure was quite same as previous age group but there was a big fall for age group 65 over the figure was 47.1 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68518518519 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55829691274 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.777677951 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.4 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.2 22.9334400587 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253354084089 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172329835974 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621989574506 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184220347793 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066125238468 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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