I utterly agree with the concept that important decisions shouldn't be taken alone. There are certain flaws in our decisions when we are considering things alone. The other reasons why I think that the important issues need other peoples' advice are according to the significance of the results and possible irrationalness of the reasons why making those calls.
First, I think that we all have our blind sides in our points of view and a simple consult from other people with other grounds and points of views would be a great help. The diversity of the personalities make people see different things in a single issue and It is sometimes the most important thing that we are missing. I have experienced the power of consulting with others in my life. There was this time that I was looking for a major to start working on and I had two choices in mind. My mother insisted that I must talk to an advisor. Although at first, I hated the idea it turned out that I was missing some important factor in choosing the right field for me; Just as my mother expected it to be.
Furthermore, before anything, we must consider the consequences of our choices. The consequences most of the times are too high to take any chances to mess up the whole thing with just one wrong call. Mistakes are unretrievable and we get to have the chance of making it to the highest points in our business or life just once. Thus, it is vivid that we can not underestimate the chance of being wrong. Accordingly, making any decisions should be upon careful considerations with consult and help of several other experts.
At last, with the current pressure of life on people, it is often the emotions that are making the choices not our minds. We all ran into difficulties in our lives and the tremendous invasion of the emotions may push us through ways that we would never step upon in complete stability of mind. Hence, it is obligatory to consult, ask about her/his opinion and have someone near us to observe and think about the issue independently from us. The person should have the power to change our mind, prevent us from doing anything out of logic and make we hasten emotional decision slow down.
In conclusion, there are many reasons that people need to talk to experts and inform others of their choices. These others can even be the family, who know them well and can have a great impact on them. Presence of possible blindsides, substantial destructive consequences, and detrimental emotional decisions are the superior reasons why I see the obligation of consulting before taking any steps in my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, thus, well, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6951754386 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63841126957 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495614035088 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8514811075 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.952380952 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150347064355 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499420987852 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513134705051 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933393067536 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527229176595 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.