You have lost and item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
- Describe the item
- Explain where & when you left it
- Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire about the bag I lost yesterday during my train journey by 'Baroda Express'.
I boarded in sleeper class 2 having seat number 57 from Baroda station to reach Bombay. The train was full and there was no space for luggage so I kept the belongings in the area below the seat. In morning when I woke up, I realised that the destination point would take just 5 minutes to arrive. In hustle and bustle of going, I left the bag in the coach itself. It is original leather bag with dark brown colour and metal handle at the top. Moreover, it had laptop and few documents inside, which are extremely important for me.
I would ask the railway staff to announce the lost bag news at each station and investigate the bag at the earliest. If you receive any information about the bag, please contact me on my mobile number 123456789 or mail me on xyz@gmail.com.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54022988506 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4614346071 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2474642063 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133041385905 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460873751964 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326634805043 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824931661948 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187953897252 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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