IN SOME COUNTRIES, TEENAGERS ARE ENCOURAGED TO DO PART-TIME JOBS BY SOME PEOPLE. OTHERS DISAGREE.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
In many countries working as a part-timer for teenagers is becoming quite common nowadays. However, there is a section of society which agrees with this notion whereas there are some people who totally disagree. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate both the views with relevant examples and put forward my opinion.
First and foremost there are many advantages for young adolescents to work as in part-time jobs the most preponderant one being that it teaches them in money management and being disciplined at a juvenile age. Such a trend is most common in students who study overseas in European countries where it is a mandate from the governments especially for teenagers to work in part-time jobs for certain hours of a week. This exercise not only helps young teenagers to learn various aspects of saving money but also enables them to manage time more effectively thus preparing them for futuristic challenges.
Similarly, others believe that working in temporary jobs do not allow juvenile minds to focus on their studies thus impacting their examination results. It is seen from many cases in the past that children who work in makeshift jobs get addicted to many bad habits like drug abuse and other addictive substances thus affecting their personal and as well as professional life. In a recent survey conducted by UNICEF in the United States, it was seen that around 30 per cent of teenagers who worked in part-time jobs got addicted to these additive substances thus affecting their education.
To conclude both arguments elucidated above are valid but looking from a long-term perspective I agree with the former argument as it provides exposure which aid teenagers in future endeavours of their professional front.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, similarly, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14436619718 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74146119835 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1776919331 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.1 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196875768867 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755549153522 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227540619207 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106771185324 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449945757153 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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