Dear Mary,
I'm writing to thank you for accepting to look after my dog and house while I'm on vacation. Also, I wanted to leave you my contacts in case of any emergency and the instructions for Julie's medication schedule.
I'll have my mobile phone with me, but if you can't reach me there, I'll be staying at the London Palace Hotel. I wrote all the their contacts and my itinerary information on the message board at the house.
Julie is a very easygoing dog and you shouldn't have any problems with her. She's taking a special medication for a skin condition she developed. You can give it to her every morning with food. I usually take her out for a walk two times a day, once in the morning and other as soon as I get home from work. I always feed her after these walks.
There isn't any work to do in the house, besides getting any correspondence in the mail box and closing all the windows when you leave. I also left you some money for any emergencies in the yellow box that is on the kitchen table.
I can't thank you enough for agreeing to help me with this task. I'm very pleased to know that Julie will have a friendly face to look at while I'm away.
All the best,
Mayara Fonseca
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ng to look after my dog and house while Im on vacation. Also, I wanted to leave yo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ions for Julies medication schedule. Ill have my mobile phone with me, but if yo...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ave my mobile phone with me, but if you cant reach me there, Ill be staying at the L...
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Suggestion: the; their
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30837004405 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28018574374 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3379771432 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194620628417 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666612230368 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444995573445 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11183619059 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056264409864 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.