You travel by bus every weekday morning, and you always use the same bus route. Recently the bus has not been reliable. It sometimes comes late and for the last few mornings it has not stopped when you hailed it. No change of schedule has been advertised. You have also noticed that the bus is far dirtier than it used to be.
Write to the bus company, explain the situation and tell them what you want them to do?
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this letter finds you well!
I'm writing to you to share my experience on your busses in the last three weeks.
As a person who had used same bus and route for the last three years to go to my work every day, I have noticed many changes and these changes are effecting me at my work, for example the bus driver doesn't committed to time, route and he did not stop even when I hailed to him! And as a result for these changes I received a warning from my manager due to late arrivals! Adding to that the cleanness of the bus and seats are getting worse than any time before, in addition I didn't find any announcements about changing stop stations, routes or bus schedules even the driver!
I suggest you to review or to hear free the bus drivers about the reason of their behaviors, plus to announce if there is any amendment to the schedule, also you can add your company to local transportation applications which they update us with arrival time, delay or new announcements I wish to consider my complain and to se the changes on ground.
Faithfully yours,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49748743719 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50591079236 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 16.3608247423 605% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 404.330173112 44.8134815571 902% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 447.5 76.5299724578 585% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.5 16.8248392259 591% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 4.34317383033 656% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271229298088 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125858090844 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103681647735 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13893459056 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548600139811 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.5 8.37731958763 591% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 70.7449484536 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.5 7.45979381443 530% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 7.59969072165 152% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 8.62886597938 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 8.54432989691 487% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 42.0 8.15463917526 515% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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