Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages of both and your point of view.
According to some people, students should receive more than one short vacations during school time, where others opine that a single long-term vacation is enough for them. In my opinion, one vacation is enough for children during their school time.
Without any qualms, if students will take more than one break in a single class, it could be beneficial for them in numerous ways. Firstly, it would mitigate the level of stress which student feels with their long academic syllabus, owing to the fact that they invariably receive enough time to put their minds out of studies. In other words, they do not need to be worried about their academic subjects throughout a year. Moreover, youngsters can learn different practical skills during vacations such as playing a musical instrument, driving, swimming to name a few.
In contrast, by allowing the younger generation to take one break in a single grade, educational institutes can ensure that they are allocating enough time to learn required subjects which is the predominant requirement of their age. By not allowing students to take more breaks, high schools can maintain continues involvement of every student. Unequivocally, in such environment students will less distract from the study which can certainly increase productivity and helps them to be more focused on their studies. For example, as per recent survey of Divyabhaskar newspaper, in India, adults get 3 months vacation between two grades which is sufficient to schedule any other activities.
To conclude, although multiple vacations can be helpful for students to reduce their academic anxiety, I believe that one vacation after each final exam will be more useful for both students and alma maters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2967032967 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67703675393 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5903768651 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.6 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186772928233 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078551127763 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661185826489 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131848242674 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064823661924 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.