These days some people suggest that employees should get a least 4 weeks holiday a year, on the ground that a proper vocation would improve efficiency during their working hours. In my view, a decent holiday is of great significance to one’s career achievement, and it is also beneficial to the company and the society.
It is undoubted that human beings are not meant to work continuously for long periods of time, like computers. Living in the modern society, people nowadays face fierce competition for promotion and suffer from great stress. Once stepped into the workplace, they are forced to be compared with other peers and they have to constantly challenge themselves. Their schedule is filled with work and social activities, as a result there is little amount of time for them to relax. Thus, after a long period of non-stop work time, they need a 4-week holidays to have a break, and when the vacation ends, they are able to work more efficiently in a cheerful mood.
Paid vacation is one of the most indispensable employee benefits, and when most of people look for employment, they would take the span of vacation into account at first. It is needless to say that superior company welfare would attract outstanding staff with excellent working abilities, so giving employees a long holiday is a virtuous cycle both to individuals and company. If most companies in the society are under good operation, the economic development would also be boosted.
To sum up, I believe that employees should get at least a 4-week vacation a year, and this is beneficial to staffs, company and the society.
- Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...eople suggest that employees should get a least 4 weeks holiday a year, on the gr...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...dispensable employee benefits, and when most of people look for employment, they would take th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, thus, at least, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95955882353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70396101464 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9586509712 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169827755898 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628587231465 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742675090843 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127844995825 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681205368913 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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