College days are best days in anyone's life, even its not an exception for present and the future generation as well. Many people lay their paths for future in the colleges. Some students goes to institutions because of persona that they would like to show to the society, even if they are not interested in studies. Certain demographics totally concentrate on subjects to lead a good life in upcoming years. How much ever the student learn or enjoy all those things would happen only in the colleges. Last year survey on education in school perplexed every one that these colleges are competing with each other to provide better future to the future generation in terms of knowledge.
Apart from studies many universities are organizing cultural programs and leadership development skills apart from their studies, this practice boosting up the children nowadays. Many researchers on college education state that what ever the child learns from college will strongly root into their brain and they can not forget them so easily. Good friends and long standing relation ship starts for every individuals from their colleges. Many people claims that person can also be judged by their friends, if a person has to become good or the bad friends play vital role in their life's.
Future generation plays an important role for our nation, many leaders, politician, government personnel would emerge from this colleges, so the government should encourage each and every child to have a better education and try make impeccable person to serve the country , indeed its our responsibility to cast out votes for better education.
Every family should allow their pupils to go for a college not only for good education but for society, because every change first starts from home.
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 61
- Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples. 56
- Recycling our waste is a big issue today. A lot of people feel that others are not recycling enough and that the government should make it a legal requirement. In your opinion, should laws be needed to ensure that people recycle their waste? 55
- In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
- Recycling our waste is a big issue today. A lot of people feel that others are not recycling enough and that the government should make it a legal requirement. In your opinion, should laws be needed to ensure that people recycle their waste? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ays are best days in anyones life, even its not an exception for present and the fu...
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Message: You should probably use 'go'.
Suggestion: go
...r future in the colleges. Some students goes to institutions because of persona that...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... government personnel would emerge from this colleges, so the government should enco...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e impeccable person to serve the country , indeed its our responsibility to cast o...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...le person to serve the country , indeed its our responsibility to cast out votes fo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our responsibility to cast out votes for better education. Every family should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10996563574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52265722867 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7687941272 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123701739175 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456432868723 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499194431136 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670312006478 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402800591546 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.