Given the good surface quality of the road built by Appian Roadway company, The vice president prefer to choose Appian Roadways to help them construct the access roads for their brand-new shopping center. However, it is hard to say the idea from the vice president is reasonable. There is some other problematic question in his conjecture.
Firstly, the vice president notice that the surface quality of the Route 101 which built by Good intentions Roadways is too dangerous. On the contrast, the surface quality of the Route 40 is still good enough. Nevetheless, he didn't think carefully about the causes of the bad surface quality. Maybe the weather is too bad, with frequent rainy days. As we all know, for sometimes,the rain poured from the sky is a little bit corrosive. The corrosive rain would accerate the damageing velocity of the road. What's more, maybe the most of vehicles running on the Route 101 are trucks which always loaded some heavy freights. These kinds of cars with heavy weights would worsen the road quality. We can't find all these additional conditions above from the memo. And it hard to predict the next road built by Appian Roadways would stay good quality for at least four years.
Secondly, the vice president aruged that it is a commitment to quality for the Appian Roadway purchasing sophisticated machines and new quality-control manager. However, personally, a new manager has to pay some time to adapt to a new working environment. He may even a neo manager who was just promoted a few months ago without any experiences. In addition, the brand-new paving machine maybe more useful,but maybe the company haven't master how to repair it what if the machine could not work. We can't know all about these situations.
All in all, in my opinion, the Vice President should make a deep investigation about these two company in order to make a clear view of which company would be better. And the Vice President should focus more on the either efficiency of building roads or the road surface quality.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The corrosive rain would accerate the damageing velocity of the road.
Error: accerate Suggestion: accurate
Error: damageing Suggestion: damaging
Sentence: These kinds of cars with heavy weights would worsen the road quality.
Error: worsen Suggestion: worse
Sentence: Secondly, the vice president aruged that it is a commitment to quality for the Appian Roadway purchasing sophisticated machines and new quality-control manager.
Error: quality-control Suggestion: quality control
Error: aruged Suggestion: argued
Sentence: He may even a neo manager who was just promoted a few months ago without any experiences.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: neo Suggestion: new
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 349 350
No. of Characters: 1648 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.322 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.722 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.475 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.45 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.982 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.309 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...0 is still good enough. Nevetheless, he didnt think carefully about the causes of the...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ainy days. As we all know, for sometimes,the rain poured from the sky is a little bi...
^^^^
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...times,the rain poured from the sky is a little bit corrosive. The corrosive rain would acc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ate the damageing velocity of the road. Whats more, maybe the most of vehicles runnin...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the vehicles') or simply say ''most vehicles''.
Suggestion: most of the vehicles; most vehicles
...city of the road. Whats more, maybe the most of vehicles running on the Route 101 are trucks whi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 694, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ights would worsen the road quality. We cant find all these additional conditions ab...
^^^^
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...and-new paving machine maybe more useful,but maybe the company havent master how to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...maybe more useful,but maybe the company havent master how to repair it what if the mac...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... what if the machine could not work. We cant know all about these situations. All ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, as to, at least, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 345.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61648434701 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9590276341 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 119.503703932 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 23.324526521 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.70786347227 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20484680719 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581470719371 0.0743258471296 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513521542854 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121540595389 0.128457276422 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378994041979 0.0628817314937 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.3799401198 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.