have a right to own a gun.
Recently, some people say that individuals should have a right to own a gun in their home. Personally, I totally disagree with having a private gun. And this essay will discuss the main reasons why I choose this idea.
To begin with, relating to the personal perspective, it is dangerous for people when they are permitted to own a kind of weapon such as a gun in their house. The reason is that individuals have a tendency to live privately in modern society, so they are easier to be extremely stressful when facing to a great deal of pressure from a heavy workload or broken relationships. Specifically, living alone without sharing ups and downs in life with others, people are likely to commit suicide because of their depression in a long time. At that time, with a gun in home, killing themselves is really an simply solution in order to overcome their pains.
On the other hand, regarding to the social perspective, owning a gun poses a severe threat on the safety of society. When the governments allow having weapons that are not used with right purposes, the life of citizens might be threaten seriously. This can be explained by the fact that it is more convenient for criminals to own guns, and they are likely to cause robberies or even become terrible murderers. As a result, the crime rate can significantly increase, and society is much more unstable, which makes residents live in fears while the authorities also struggle to solve this problem.
In conclusion, although there is an idea that citizens are permitted to have a gun, in my opinion, I beg to differ due to its severe negative impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('simply') instead an adjective, or a noun ('solution') instead of another adjective.
...n in home, killing themselves is really an simply solution in order to overcome their pains. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7695035461 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72033894056 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8357341365 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335987013036 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124647192416 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122707659985 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217658299117 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103115697561 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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