Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and, as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Large businesses and international brands spend an enormous amount of money for marketing and advertising. Consequently, people tend to watch those advertisements all the time while small local businesses fail to reach the customers. This can lead to some serious problems, such as the closure of local businesses and the monopoly in business. Other than that, people could be easily trapped by large businesses. There are few steps that can be adopted to address this issue and motivate people to buy local products.
Naturally, people prefer to buy products that were consciously or unconsciously publicised to their mind and thus many local businesses, even with their quality products, cannot attract consumers. The dominance of international brands and large businesses will destroy the market for locally made products and thus would make thousands of people unemployed. Moreover, large markets do their very best to attract the public attention to their products and advertising is one of the best tools they have. Sensitive, creative and deceptive advertisements and marketing policies often make the people believe that they need these products. This would create a monopoly in the market and people would often be deceived. Thus consumers would be trapped by the large businesses and would have no alternatives for them but to buy products of some particular brands.
In order to encourage people to buy local products, some solutions should be taken into account. The government should strictly monitor and ban any deceptive and illusory advertisement from the mass media. People should compare a product's quality before purchasing from shops and the shop owners must shelf local products along with the branded products. Furthermore, a government authority should rate and review any product and disclose it to the public. Finally, local product manufacturers should be financially supported by the banks and the government as they are helpful for the economic progress of a country.
Absolute dominance of large businesses can have unimaginable effects that can damage a city's or even a country's financial situation. A solution to this problem is systematising local markets and creating a closely integrated system that can have an effective outcome.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, moreover, so, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44759206799 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90513747846 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7950212426 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383857365446 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125188883584 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617644209407 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222641515882 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791586342305 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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