all of us have the experience of schools homework . also may only remember the tired and exhausting of that but cannot be denied they were one of the important ways for improvement of our knowledge . some people believe that the daily assignment is not vital for children and perhaps kill the encourage and innovation of them. in my opinion, without exercise cannot expect to obtain new things in an excellent manner.
some teacher have this trend that for punishment of their students give a massive amount of homework to them .in psychological aspect it lead to hate of them from learning .beside that when all the daily time of kids is spent only for copy or write from books they can not boost their innovations .for example you can imagine a children that after school time is forced to stay at home for working on homework every day . after a period of time they sense of illness and tired because without playing they cannot refresh their mind .
on the other hand's skills need to exercise to be a part of our ability .you cannot have pretty hand write only after writing more letters. the brain must create a plan for doing things and it is not possible after doing it for a lot of times. for instance, you may able to learn driving with focus and attention in first after a period of time that you have the experience of drive you can do it without any thinking. such things show that repeat helps us for better learning. furthermore, if take children free from an assignment they breeding unresponsible and perhaps lazy.
in conclusion, it was shown that a heavy amount of school homework make students unsatisfied and not allow then for creativity.in contrast a reasonable assignment help to improve them in doing things that recently have learned. have little duty same this can be useful in children behavior too.
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. 84
- do you agree or disagree?all university student should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is 68
- Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars .To what extent do you agree ? 61
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What measures do you think might be effective? 56
- Homework is a part of school life Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them What do you think about it Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examp 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 321.0 196.424390244 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65109034268 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42046098812 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 106.607317073 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548286604361 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 283.868780488 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.6565602287 43.030603864 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 5.23603664747 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 1.69756097561 2239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269697567645 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910870469219 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805121171125 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173415181303 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222575249084 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.