People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns?
There as a critical idea assumes that people living in urban cities has a tendency to face a variety of issues compared to others in smaller town. It can be revealed by some explanations, accompanying with solutions should be a responsibility from government to stimulate inhabitants live in lessen crowed areas.
In fact, the higher living standard could be considered as one of among problems people are facing. In a return , a vast number of them have chosen to be a criminal, becoming a thief to pocket money from others. Even worse, such serious crime could happen like kid-napping children for those organs trafficking cartel is rising recently. Air and water pollution is also a remarkable fear to the community, leading to serious illnesses such as cancers without undefined treatment to cure.
To diminish some key problems in major cities, there has a few suggestions should be taken action by government. Investing infrastructures in rural areas could be probably succeeded in attracting migration from metropolitan cities to provincial ones . Each state leaders should facilitate for those Medium-Small Entrepreneurs in setting up their own companies, factories and subsidiaries. Therefore, more attractive job are created for hunters as well as contribute to improve life quality. For example, hospital is most likely important in any residential places, aiming to not only cure and support medical care for town dwellers but also create a huge opportunities of works for the local.
To sum up, we are unable against the tendency of migration to urban cities in spite of issues they might counter, we could inspire the inhabitants moving towards to smaller towns in which have been facilitated with better investment for living, however.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30107526882 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.996035509 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670250896057 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8589417612 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176779504908 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618727609379 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770765205742 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112243081315 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749943250601 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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