Some people believe that the only purpose of films are entertain. But others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Entertainment plays a crucial role in life with mass form as we know it today is Film. Demanding of watching movies is increasing incredibly with diversity of categories. People suppose that film just entertains them simply without any gaining value. I couldn’t agree with this viewpoint from my perspectives, however.
Movies are the most favourite hobby of people widely and they are in tendency going to cinema rather than watching online at least once a week. Its diversity ranges from Action movies to Horrible ones, from Science fiction to cartoon to meet various demands from all ages. Additionally, we have fewer chance to operate our mind when watching movies compared to other medias and all we can receive from those but laughing and great hilarious moment with friends and families.
On the other hand, the advantages from movies are also vary. Those well-known Producers and Directors aim to shoot their own products more beneficial for their audience knowledge in some ways. For instance, science movies can broaden audience’s mind with learnings from that area such as the world out of planet like Mars, animal wild world, etc…Otherwise, there also have battle movies bring us the widely open view of soldiers and their families suffering from war’s consequence inevitably. Cartoon movies some how not only educate for our children about humanity, kindness among human, love to animals, etc… but also let adults like us has a chance to look back and contemplation to life. Movies are neither only an entertained form nor watching when we have nothing to do, they are like a book which we have to learn how to understand the transferred value from Director’s intention.
In lieu of reading book, film is considerably recommended as a media to advantage us educational values and I’m growing up since was a child by explore all the hidden lessons from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Otherwise
...lanet like Mars, animal wild world, etc…Otherwise, there also have battle movies bring us...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
... consequence inevitably. Cartoon movies some how not only educate for our children about...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...ok, film is considerably recommended as a media to advantage us educational values and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, at least, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15806451613 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80355987467 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8850281517 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133669980676 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052975442216 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519148963992 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848997957568 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368332899218 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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