Nowadays, educational institutes do not teach juveniles much about the health, which is beneficial for their future. I completely agree with this notion and reckon that bureaucracy should try to ameliorate this situation. This essay shall discuss in subsequent paragraphs before forming and logical conclusion.
To initiate with, the government should make health related subjects mandatory in school and colleges because it is important to know for young people, how they can become fit and fine. Moreover, school and colleges also have responsibility to teach juveniles with the practical examples because if they learn with practical example then it becomes easy for them to remember it for a long time. Furthermore teacher must stimulate the youngsters to do exercise and they need to teach learners about the preferable diet as well.
Apart from that, school and colleges should provide extra classes about health because physical fitness is quite imperative. Furthermore, educational institutions must provide sports and exercise knowledge along with academic such as cricket, football and volleyball. For instance, if the youngsters participate in sports activities then they become more health conscious. Beside this, teacher must ignore the unimportant subjects so the young folks be able to confer more time to health.
To recapitulate, parents also have responsibility to guide their children about the sports and promote their children to join sports activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...or them to remember it for a long time. Furthermore teacher must stimulate the youngsters t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65470852018 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84697921936 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2923744023 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163499813728 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633199519812 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598742019662 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096192692039 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307293500976 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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