Write a letter to a college Principal, where you attended a one day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain what was the type of the course, what happened and what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again.
Dear Sir / Madam:
I am writing to regarding my unhappy experience about I attended a one day computer course which was held by Computer Department. There were 30 people participate in this course.
I found the one day computer course poster issued by Computer Department and it stated that the course will introduce the app development with demonstration. I really interested in and decide to take part in the course. On that day, I arrived at the place in time and found only one computer equipped. It really inadequate facility for arrange this kind of seminar course.
I suggest that the facility of technical course is the most important key for participants and tutors. I hope it will not be happen again.
Your faithfully,
Jone
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-12 | ielts_testbig | 56 | view |
| 2019-01-05 | parya | 78 | view |
- Write a letter to a college Principal, where you attended a one day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain what was the type of the course, what happened and what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again. 56
- Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree? 56
- To improve their appearances, many people spend a lot of money on products like clothing, haircut, and beauty products. Some people think it is a good way to spend money; other people believe that there are better ways to spend money. Discuss both views a 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, regarding, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 125.0 206.0 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.016 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83408909044 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 127.690721649 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6627969579 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240917476581 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828246796955 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065679275811 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163836063392 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721803343684 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.