With an upcoming modern means of communications, it is no longer necessary to right letters. I agree to this statement partially. Modern means of communication such as emails, mobile phones, video chat are faster means of communications in comparison to old conventional means such as letter writing. Specially these are very helpful at times when someone needs to send message in case of emergency such as informing family members for person's ill health or contacting an employee or employer for job etc. With video chats we are able to see the face of our loved one and talk to him no matter in which part of the country he is sitting.
But however, in case of letter writing one can pen down the feelings and write it down all the vibrations of love. The person to whom the letter is sent can keep the letter and read it again and again. Old people in our country still use this way of communications. In todays hectic and fast life it becomes difficult though to sit calmly and write a letter and further go to post office to post it. If we do this for someone then it truely shows our emotions for the person on the other end. On the contrary, internet is very easily available at each very corner now a days.
Thus, both the ways of communications have there own benefits and cannot be truely compared because one ways is speed effective and other way is emotion effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
With an upcoming modern means of communications, it is no longer nece...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'But'.
Suggestion: But
... part of the country he is sitting. But however, in case of letter writing one can pen ...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ry easily available at each very corner now a days. Thus, both the ways of communicatio...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...asily available at each very corner now a days. Thus, both the ways of communicatio...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...s, both the ways of communications have there own benefits and cannot be truely compared ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one way', 'a way', or simply 'ways'?
Suggestion: one way; a way; ways
...s and cannot be truely compared because one ways is speed effective and other way is emo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56626506024 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60364267482 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606425702811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.321041535 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172429644412 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658704579219 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602535913853 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980011433407 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583442648716 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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