Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved
the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.
Food has become easier to prepare and this is would improve the way people live. There are numerous ways to prepare food. And then, there are many people who change the way they live because of food such as lifestyle, fast food and housekeeper. Food nowdays is one of style for people to show off about level. It is because food has own style. However, food would improve the way people live. I state my opinion on the following points.
First of all, food has changed lifestyle of people. It means that lifestyle can bring me to Century Era. From easy to prepare, i can show off. Moreover, lifestyle in prepare food make me know how to use kitchen electronics stuff such us toaster, coffee maker, juicer and the rest. Those devices will do not change vitamin or taste inside food.Thus, lifestyle modern equipments is helping to serve meal.
In addition, housekeeper can be other ways to improve the way people live. It is because house keeper very usefull to help cooking at home. Housekeeper is somebody that help homework in our house to be more keep clean. For example, if i do not have much time for cooking, at this case, the housekeeper is always be alternative way to prepare food. Well, housekeeper is important to be care of.
What is more about easier prepare and improve the way people live is fast food. Fast food is dish which cook in fast time. There are many kinds of fast foods such as burger, french fries, and pizza. Fast food usually has high of colesterol inside, but fast food could save time. It is because fast food will do not make you wait for long. Serving fast food, everything with quickly. So, this trick for saving time and absolutelly has changed people live.
On balance, i cannot avoid that food has become easier to prepare and this is really improve the way people live nowdays. Otherwise, live in these days which full with fast-paced would help me in working to be faster.
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Sentence: On balance, i cannot avoid that food has become easier to prepare and this is really improve the way people live nowdays.
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