You miss a flight due to a problem at airport.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
+ describe what happened that caused you miss the flight.
+ explain how missing your flight affected you.
+ make it clear what you would like the airline do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to complaining about a mistake of booking service on your website, causing me to miss my fight.
I had a business trip which played a crucial part in my company’s grow on 15th August from Bangkok to Toronto but my mission had not been done greatly due to your awful service. In fact, although I was confirmed hay email my booking was successful, I was stated at the airport that my ticket was canceled because of online system errors.
As a result, this affected not only my job but also my company significantly as our reputation became less reliable. Our clients, therefore, might be reluctant to reach a new consensus in the next business. Furthermore, it is time-wasting when our trade meeting had to be delayed up to three days.
I would like to request an official apology from your Airline to my company as well as compensating for the cost of the flight.
I await for your prompt response.
Yours Faithfully,
Sean.
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- You miss a flight due to a problem at airport.Write a letter to the airline. In your letter+ describe what happened that caused you miss the flight.+ explain how missing your flight affected you.+ make it clear what you would like the airline do. 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, in fact, as a result, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78488372093 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79995436685 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2050118004 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 4.34317383033 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115053811807 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508831949156 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468973346553 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721028999768 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489180496461 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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