Some Government say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes.
It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way.
Do you agree or disagree?
Population control is a vital concern especially for developing nations such as India. The essential steps to control the population rate are mandatory for the lawmaking agencies to run the nation smoothly. In my opinion, I completely agree with the above-mentioned statement. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my view.
At the onset, a fundamental reason behind the necessity of population control is to develop the nation and benefits everyone. The excess of everything is bad, the same view can be applied to the population of any country. The burden of excess individuals impacts badly on the management of government. For illustration, providing the basic needs of survival to the common man is a prime issue for the overpopulated country. The government often fails to facilitate those demands, hence results in failure of the nation.
In addition to that, another predominant factor is the sustainability of the resources. We live in a world where natural resources like drinking water are limited in content. Utilization of these sources in an optimum way is the main target for any government so that most of the individuals can avail these resources accordingly. There is no doubt that the scientists are looking for the alternatives of these precious resources but it may take time to result in the productive outcome. Thus, the population control can save the life of others and benefit the community as well as the nation’s growth and development
In conclusion, lack of unlimited resources for the people to fulfil their needs for the life span force the government to make policies on population control and I must say this step should be taken on immediate basis with seriousness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, if, look, may, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14788732394 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07213416564 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9341957833 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216066535568 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615633817365 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535117396488 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131081526591 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254874273324 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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