The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the proportion of households that lived in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales in 1918 and 2011.

Between 1918 and 1971, renting accommodation was more commonly then owning accommodation. The biggest gap occurred in 1918 when 78% of household lived in rented accommodation, compared 23% in owned accommodation. The proportion of tenants decreased to 68% in 1939 and remained the same in 1953. It kept a downward tendency and in 1971, the percentage of households in rented accommodation (50%) was the same as the in owned accommodation.

However, with this downward tendency, after 1971, there were more families that owned their dwellings than rented and it increased continuously until 1991, at 68%. This highest point fixed in time of 1991 and 2001. In 2011, the percentage of households owning accommodation dropped slightly to 65%.

Overall, more families in England and Wales owned their dwellings over years, while fewer family rented.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35256410256 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02577004288 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5529800336 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285180100975 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134955664513 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112089688482 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193433658354 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104853449091 0.0819641961636 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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