You recently organized an all-day-meeting for your company, which tool place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
- Say what the participants likes about the hotel
-Explain why they were unhappy about the food
- suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future
Dear Sir or Madam
Hope this emails finds you well.
My name is Brian from “Out of the world” company. As you recall, I have organized a full day convention at your hotel 2 weeks ago for my firm and after that, I have received mixed feedbacks about the event which I think might be helpful to your operation.
My colleague and management board fell in love with your spacious ball room which was elegantly decorated. Moreover, your supporting staff were extremely friendly and helpful that day. Every demand we had were well taken care of and there were always smile on their face. We were truly impressed in your professionalism.
However, since the bar had been raised up so high, we were a bit disappointed when we were served with undercooked steak as well as non-fresh seafood. Someone actually experience uncomfortable feeling at the end of a day.
As a world class hotel, I hope you can be more considerate in training your cook staff and selecting appropriate ingredient suppliers. While your quality assurance procedure is improved, it might even help to perfect your service in this competitive food and beverage industry.
Kind regards
Brian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...finds you well. My name is Brian from 'Out of the world' company. As...
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Line 6, column 206, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...d helpful that day. Every demand we had were well taken care of and there were alway...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uly impressed in your professionalism. However, since the bar had been raised u...
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Line 8, column 169, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... as non-fresh seafood. Someone actually experience uncomfortable feeling at the end of a d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, moreover, so, well, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01530612245 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78768992514 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709183673469 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9465951321 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9166666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219195095879 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668773645734 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050734913806 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104448462473 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541451144283 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.