In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
The question of studying at home by using advanced technology or learning t traditional schools has been a constant subject of lively debate all around the world in recent years. Attitudes towards this issue vary greatly. As far as I am concerned, there are a number of points that need to be taken into consideration here.
People in favour of choosing to study at home justify their position with strong arguments, one of which could be that they can have a flexible time to study instead of a rigid schedule at traditional schools. It is very important with someone who are working full time and do not have time to attend a formal course. Another justification which should not be overlooked is that self-learning students can choose their favourite subjects or topics to study and allow them ignore unnecessary subjects. With regard to the last argument, it is acknowledged that studying at home encourage students manage their time effectively and help create a good habit for them in their future lives.
Although the important role of technological devices in many aspects of modern life can not be denied, many opponents put forward a number of arguments on the other side of the issue. To start with, it is popularly believed that studying at traditional schools can help students developing balanced between emotion and knowledge because they can interact with their teachers and classmates in real life. Apart from the above-mentioned point, it may be true to say that it should be happier to communicate with people than computer or television all day. Finally, it is well-documented that there is only a minority of students can manage effectively when studying and most of self-study students have at least a failure when they study at home.
All in all, although there are a number of different viewpoints regarding such a topic of heated debate, to the best of my knowledge, the idea that using technological devices to study at home will never prove to be convincing among an ever-growing hosts of opponents, myself included. It is important to understand that such an opinion should be viewed from different angles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... important with someone who are working full time and do not have time to attend a formal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, apart from, at least, to start with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01120448179 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87543439074 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6678447566 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.615384615 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298527613767 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100390771613 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889117314666 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176615383281 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322716883715 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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