Nowdays more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face.Is this a positive or negative development?
In present generation, most of the people are interacting socially with others through online on social networks and not meeting directly. In my opinion, I believe that there is some negative sign to socialize in online. Few people are taking advantage at online meetups.
In olden days, people gets interacted directly to others. At that time, there is no any tele-communication or social networking sites. You can explore places and spend some time together. So that relationship go stronger. For example, I have good childhood friends. Because, we spent time together and play cricket and watching movies when we were free time.
Now most of all the teenagers are preferring facebook, wats app and some other dating sites to interact. I have to accept that in some cases socialize in online has some advantages.If you go some new place you could not able to find friends easily. In that cases, online is the best option to find the new people. You can interact easily with facebook or instagram wherever you go. For example, When I came to Toronto first time, facebook helped me a lot to found the new friends. But there is some dis advantages choosing socialize with online. Due to privacy concern, few people trapping us using social networking sites which causes teenagers went wrong direction.
In conclusion, I believe that socialize through online is easily to find new friends.But if relationship continue to grow stronger, you have to interact directly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re places and spend some time together. So that relationship go stronger. For example, ...
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...time. Now most of all the teenagers are preferring facebook, wats app and some other datin...
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Suggestion: If
...socialize in online has some advantages.If you go some new place you could not abl...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...socialize in online has some advantages.If you go some new place you could not abl...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to socialize'
Suggestion: to socialize
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...gh online is easily to find new friends.But if relationship continue to grow strong...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08641975309 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75616343084 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6590009812 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7058823529 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1269626518 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460483660167 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459521891734 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931435353717 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621695939678 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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