ou are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter:
Say what the problem is.
Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting.
Ask the provider to solve the problem.
Dear Smith,
Please treat this letter as a formal apology from my side on missing the kick-off meeting for our new customer. I am awfully ashamed of what I did. you had given me an oppurtunity which I could not fulfill. this is not the first instance I have brought dismay to you.
I could not participate in the webinar due to two reasons. Firstly, as my son's school bus did not came today so I had to drop him and secondly while commuting to office my car's tyre became flat. All this wasted approx an hour and eventually I couldn't reached the office on time.
I have written an apology to the client and have asked for a revised time for re-session. I assure you that I would plan way ahead and will make the introduction with them a fruitful one. I wil put in all the efforts to fetch revenue from ABC corp.
Hope you would excuse me this time.
Yours Sincerely
Ravi
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Comments
Yes this letter was from a
Yes this letter was from a previous question
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...r. I am awfully ashamed of what I did. you had given me an oppurtunity which I cou...
^^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... oppurtunity which I could not fulfill. this is not the first instance I have brough...
^^^^
Line 6, column 99, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
... Firstly, as my sons school bus did not came today so I had to drop him and secondly...
^^^^
Line 6, column 244, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... wasted approx an hour and eventually I couldnt reached the office on time. I...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... introduction with them a fruitful one. I wil put in all the efforts to fetch rev...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31242104573 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1498072728 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.035911815255 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0164607713038 0.0766984524023 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291773855495 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0125953502759 0.12726935374 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153985109154 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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