Most people try to balance between their work and other parts of their lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the reasons for this and what can be done to solve this.
One of the most conspicuous trends in the 21st century is the difficulty of maintaining the balance between working and other parts of a daily life. Ordinarily, people find it hard to fulfill the responsibilities in the working places as well as their own home. This is certainly a problem faced by many.
To begin with, the highly competitive business could be the main reason leading to this imbalance. Living in the world full of talented competitors, people are put under high pressure of working all day long to keep up with others or they will be left behind and even eliminated. Therefore, they are not allowed to take care of different demands except devoting their time on working offices. In this case, taking full advantage of leisure time is a solution worth mentioned. For example, instead of travelling to work by car, people can go on foot or go by bike in order to achieve both targets of moving to the offices and do exercises for healthier bodies.
The next points that need to be taken in consideration is the ineffective schedule that cause overrun working projects, consequently, occupying the rest of the day which should be used for other purposes. As a result, people are encouraged to learn how to arrange an adequate daily time-table as well as follow it continuously to avoid wasting time.
In conclusions, because of above reasons, people are currently over-rating their career than any other parts of their lives. For a sustainable development, human have to change their life-style and spend more time outside working offices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...ge an adequate daily time-table as well as follow it continuously to avoid wasting time. ...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pend more time outside working offices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96197718631 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82156947799 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0860900209 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331934856595 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106194601672 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419736554294 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185092099111 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609820452325 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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