You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter, give details of the job, explain why it is important to you, suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference.
Dear Mrs. Jane,
I am writing to request you to please provide me your recommendation in the form of letter which will be significant to get my first job.
Let me explain my situation in details, fortunately after graduation I applied for a job for the role of data scientist, This profile requires me to design and develop machines enabled with artificial intellegnece. This opportunity will expose me to the real-time environment and give me a platform to grow as an individual. Therefore, they have requested me for letter of reference from someone under whome I had ever worked. However, I do not have any real time production experience, but I had completed my academic project under your supervision, so for me your reference would be very helpful to get this job.
If possible, kindly include my statistical achievements and quantitave thinking abilities which you had always admire. Moreover, now I am also ITIL certified which would provide me edge over other candidates. I am required to submit this letter by the end of this week, so please handover this letter to me on weekends or you can directly send them via mail.
Thankyou for considering me.
Yours Faithfully,
Kamran Arif
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs. Jane, I am writing to request you to please pr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely after graduation I applied for a job for the role of data scientist, This pro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nece. This opportunity will expose me to the real-time environment and give me a ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'admired'.
Suggestion: admired
...thinking abilities which you had always admire. Moreover, now I am also ITIL certified...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or considering me. Yours Faithfully, Kamran Arif
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02487562189 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96681813586 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9101418725 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199465608209 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074453726259 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603684231631 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126015199286 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640653864324 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.