Dear Mrs. Peterson,
I am Cathy Grey, I was your student at Mason College in the year 2012-2014. I was a dissertation student under you, and my topic was "Detection of mentally retarded genes in patients with Down's Syndrome". I am writing this letter to request you to help me to get a reference letter from you, regarding my performance academically.
I have applied for a job at one of the Genetic testing center in Ahmedabad, i am applying for a post of junior research fellow in a project aiming to correct Down Syndrome in the fetus by using a new genetic tool. This approach is totally different and unique in itself.
This fellowship is really important to me, because the research is totally innovative and new, there has been no other research paper on such technique. If we succeed in this project, then it will be something breakthrough, and it will greatly impact on my Resume and might as well help me to get in to a good university for my Ph.D.
I would like you to mention about my performance and the timely dedication that i had given, towards the completion of project be included in the reference letter.
I am really looking forward to your response at the earliest.
Thank you.
Your's Sincerely,
Cathy Grey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...garding my performance academically. I have applied for a job at one of the Ge...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he Genetic testing center in Ahmedabad, i am applying for a post of junior resear...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...formance and the timely dedication that i had given, towards the completion of pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78440366972 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90823155721 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4132805227 44.8134815571 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188193108595 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068652488973 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062904288973 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857150445955 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047936710742 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.